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2017深圳二模英语作文 请外教就你班的话剧节目进行指导

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文章摘要:2017深圳二模英语作文 请外教就你班的话剧节目进行指导,指导思想居之不疑配搭,琼林玉树压境雷颖。

 假定你是李华,你们班级的节目“哈姆雷特(Hamlet)”将参加下个月学校“英语文化节”话剧drama比赛,你给度假中的外教Mr.Hurst写一封电子邮件,并附上节目录像,请他给予你相关的指导。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Hurst,
Yours,
LiHua


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第二节
Version 1
Dear Mr. Hurst,
I am sorry to disturb you while you are enjoying your vacation. I am writing on behalf of my classmates for your advice.
Recently we have been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month, which is an important event in our school’s English Cultural Festival. With the attached video of our rehearsal, I sincerely hope you could offer your guidance on our performance. I would also appreciate if you could share your valued opinion on our costumes, acting skills and onstage light and sound effects.
Any suggestions are highly appreciated and we will make proper adjustments accordingly. I hope you have a pleasant vacation despite my disturbing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Version 2
Dear Mr. Hurst,
I am sorry to trouble you during your vacation. My classmates and I would like to ask for your help.
Our school is having a Drama Competition next month as part of an English Cultural Festival, and we have been working hard on our performance of Hamlet. I have sent a video of us practicing our play. Could please you tell us what you think of our performance and acting skills? Also, is there anything we can do to improve our clothing, light and sound effects?
We look forward to hearing your ideas, which will help improve our performance. Thank you for your help. Enjoy the rest of your holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua

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